Thursday, October 1, 2009

And Now For Something Completely Different

I'm getting another piece published, and this time it's something totally unlike what I normally write. I think of myself as a fiction writer, primarily as a novelist. I worked hard on one nonfiction piece that came together and is soon to be published. But I also wrote one poem that has recently been accepted for publicatoin. Apart from a handful of poems to fulfill a high school English class requirement, I don't think I've written any other poetry. But a couple of years ago, I had an idea for a poem and sat down and wrote it. It seemed halfway decent to me, but what do I know? I'm not a poet, and I don't read a lot of poetry, so I never bothered to submit it to journals or anything. Then this summer, I decided to pull it out and look at it again. I rewrote it and decided I might as well send it out. On the off chance that it got accepted somewhere, it would be nice to have an exra credit on my CV. Plus, unlike with my fiction, I didn't have much at stake in the submission process. If it got rejected, it wouldn't much hurt my feelings because I know I'm not a poet. So I sent it out, and it got accepted.

Of course, I'm thrilled to have one more thing published. This will be another credit on my CV, and publishing in multiple genres could help me get teaching jobs as it demonstrates that I am qualified to teach a mixed workshop course without completely alienating those writers interested in poetry. And when I looked over the poem again, I must admit that I think it's pretty good. The language is carefully chosen, there's a nice rhythm to it, and there's some alliteration that I think really helps the whole thing resonate. But having this piece of writing accepted while I'm still waiting for acceptances for my fiction, which I've worked much harder and longer on, leaves me wondering if I can draw any conclusions from this experience.

One thing that I've decided about this--one great, wonderful, positive thing--is that I do in fact have an ability to use language well. I've long felt that, as a writer, beautiful writing is not my specialty. I've read a number of stories in workshops over the years where I have greatly admired the writer's ability to put words together into beautiful sentences even when I didn't much care for the actual story the writer was telling. I've seen this same thing with published stories as well. Literary journals are full of beautifully written, boring stories (this is often what I think about when I hear criticism of MFA style writing). And while I admired my peers' abilities, I accepted that I wasn't so naturally gifted. But I've worked hard to hone my language skills. I try to pay attention to my diction and to the rhythm and flow of my writing, and I think my prose is much nicer now. So having a success in the world of poetry, which is so much more about one's ability to use language than it is to convey meaning or be clear, well, that tells me that I have been successful in developing my skills there. So, well done me.

But there's another conclusion I draw. I'm hesitant to bring this up because I fear it will seem derogatory and I don't intend it that way. I have admiration and respect for poets. I fully acknowledge that I am not one of them and apart from this one instance of dabbling in their field, I cannot do what they do. But the conclusion I draw is that it may actually be easier to get poetry published than to get fiction published. And what I mean by this is not that it's easier to write poetry or that the standards for poetry are less vigorous. I mean that purely from a numbers standpoint, there's more room for journals to publish poetry. I was glancing at a few journals the other day and counted up the different types of work. From my extremely limited survey I concluded that many journals publish in a typical issue perhaps four or five short stories, two or three essays, and twenty or so poems. This, of course, varies greatly. Some journals will publish dozens of stories. Others publish no nonfiction at all. But of those journals that publish both poetry and fiction, it is highly likely that while the number of pages dedicated to fiction in a given issue outnumber the pages of poetry, there are more actual poems than there are stories.

I also imagine (and again, this is pure speculation) that there are fewer poets out in the world submitting their work. Because it is something that many view as specialized and difficult and almost magical, many writers are reluctant to attempt poetry. But many of those same people assume they can write a story because it's the same kind of language they use everyday when writing e-mails. Any literate person knows how to write prose, so why not a piece of fiction? So I would guess that there are more aspiring fiction writers than aspiring poets in the world and more writers submit fiction than submit poetry. But even if I'm wrong there and the numbers are even, that still means that a journal could recieve a hundred poems and a hundred stories and find space in an issue to publish twenty percent of those poems and in the same number of pages only two or three percent of the stories. So while all of those poems may be wonderful, it's quite likely that some wonderful stories are rejected at the same time because there simply isn't enough space for all the good ones.

It's possible (or likely) that I have no idea what I'm talking about and this is all wild speculation, but I'd guess that on a whole it is statistically likelier to have a poem accepted than a story. Once again, let me emphasize that I don't intend to show disrespect for poets and what they do; however, when I finally get a story published, it will feel more significant to me than having this poem published.

3 comments:

Ashley Cowger said...

I think that's a good point about the sheer number of poems that can be accepted to fill up the same amount of pages for every one story that gets accepted. In my experience, though, more poetry gets submitted than fiction. At MFA/MFYou we get WAY more poetry submissions than fiction, and I think the same was true at Permafrost, too. I actually do think there are more people out there interested in writing poetry than prose, which is interesting because prose is much more popular than poetry, from a market perspective. But either way, I TOTALLY agree with your assessment that getting a poem accepted says a lot about your writing ability on the language level. You should be very proud!

Justus said...

That's very interesting that places would get more poetry submissions. I was just taking a guess, which was evidently wrong, that there are fewer would be poets out there. That's what you get for trying to draw conclusions with no real data.

PancakePhilosopher said...

I agree with Ashley, and I also think that a lot of really good poets COULD be really good fiction writers if they wanted to be. Maybe I'm being overly cynical, but I think a lot of people try poetry because poems are a lot shorter and therefore a good poem takes a lot less time to hone than a good story. Well I'm not saying I think it's true but I think it's what many people think when they write poetry. I like writing poetry, too; it can be a nice cathartic experience that doesn't take all day, and whether it's good or not doesn't necessarily matter unless you plan on selling it or breaking into academia with it. I think it's hard for poems to get accepted for publication because 1) there are a ton of (good) submitting poets, and 2) a poem has much less space to drive a point home and evoke powerful feelings than a story does. (Unless someone writes a Milton-esque epic poem or something.) That's just my take on it.

But yeah, like Ashley said, I think having a poem accepted by a journal is no small feat, and you should be proud. Poems that my writing profs think are excellent have been rejected by lots of journals. Of course you have way more writing experience than I do, and I know that some of my professors probably don't actually believe the poems are excellent (I just wish they would be honest about it). And besides I'm going for prose writing, so maybe I too don't really "understand" poetry. Hopefully I can get whatever misconceptions I have cleared up in the next few years.

Congrats on the acceptances!